Score: 10

"Really awesome movie..."

submission: GoD-DAMN 9/11 TRIBUTE FUK

date: September 11, 2006

I'm always here for you guys.

Now, a quality review:
awesome graphics
awesome style
awesome sound
awesome violence
awesome interactivity
awesome humor
awesome overall

Score: 10

"Awesome & Brilliant - as always"

submission: On The Moon (episode 8)

date: September 6, 2006

I must admit I am extremely pleased with this episode!
Other are good too, no doubts, but this one is the best. It is not boring at any part !!

I also must admit that I'm not a big fan of On The Moon series, I'm more addicted at theWeeble.

But you definitely deserve a frontpage. I voted five.

Score: 8

"Estranged"

submission: Sentient Fish Rape

date: August 22, 2006

Well done.

It wasn't scary actually, but I guess you can call it a horror.
Nice animating, drawing, and especially voice acting!
Too bad that there wasn't more background music.
That's the biggest mistake.

Short, funny, random, strange.
You received 5.

Nino

Score: 10

"AWESOME !"

submission: Clock Freaks

date: August 17, 2006

It is the best Clock Crew day 2006 submission up to now!
It is good that you waited a day to finish (that is obvious).

Graphics is just awesome, complex.
Animation too.
The "story" too, original!
It wasn't boring at all, really good job at that too.

It would be good that it is a bit longer, but heh...

And nice syncing on the intro, too.

Nino

Score: 8

"Quite Well, The History, Huh"

submission: Clock day: The beginning

date: August 15, 2006

It's a good start. I liked the scene you set up, and was interested to see what happened when the character got to the paintbrush. Sadly, he never made it.

Suggestions follow:

Consider taking some tutorials on Flash. Below that same link you clicked to submit your flash is a little link that says, "LEARN FLASH." Follow that link and you'll find a bunch of tutorials on how to make your animations look and sound good. Do some of those tutorials and your next effort should be a lot better.

Your flash needs a preloader with a start button. On the Newgrounds Flash Portal page, there's a link right below the "Submit" button that says, "GET NG LOADERS N' STUFF!" Click that link to download a .FLA with a preloader in it. Copy and paste the first frame of that into your animation, and you'll have a preloader, complete with a start button.

Your character moved along really slowly. Think about speeding him up a bit.

Your flash didn't really tell a story or demonstrate any kind of meaning or purpose. While "random" can be good if done well, you might consider adding some kind of a plot or story line to your next flash.

Newgrounds isn't the place to upload your tests. In Flash, you can push CTRL-ENTER to test your flash and see if it works. You can also export your flash to a .SWF file and see if it runs on your computer. If it does, your movie worked, and there's no need to test it on Newgrounds.

Your flash loops endlessly. You can add an actionscript stop(); code to the final frame of your flash to stop it from going on forever, or, better yet, add a replay button at the end. If you're unsure of how to do this, check the Newgrounds flash tutorials for help.

That's it!
:)

Score: 8

"Would be a great one.."

submission: The Ultimate Clockdown

date: August 15, 2006

Nice idea - editting (very badly though) the Ultimate Showdown song and put it in the Clock movie.

Well - nice animation, graphics; but - LAGS.

This was indeed one of the best CC movies yet, but it lags too fucking much.
I put the quality to low but it still lagged.

I voted Five though!
Happy CC Day!

Nino

Score: 1

"MEGALOL"

submission: Whey clock day

date: August 15, 2006

Wow that was like LMFAO

make Something next time...

Score: 9

"Excellent!"

submission: Remember the clock day!

date: August 15, 2006

Awesome work!

I was kind of shocked when I saw the intro. I thought the Clock is listening to that Pop.
I was wrong (thankfully).

The graphics was decent, animation too, and it's Clock Day huh?!

Fivened.

HAPPY CLOCK DAY

Score: 6

"Not Bad"

submission: The Legend of Clock Clock

date: August 12, 2006

When I saw the title I thought it's another fan Clock movie, but I guess it's the opposite thing.

Well - I like how you drew the desert. Really nice especially how it's blended with the (very strong) sun.

Nice Clocks layout, too.

Nice movie, but it needs a kind of better story and it definitly needs to be longer.

Score: 1

"Missing Content and Bad Layout"

submission: S.E.D| Random Tutorial v1

date: August 11, 2006

That you submitted this before like 2 years, you'd most likely got a frontpage.

HOWEVER, nowadays, tutorials are just out.
There's plenty of them to cover everything.
If you want to win something, than make something that will cover Flash in Graphics / Artwork / Animation.

Not that.

Plus the navigation, layout is really bad.