Really awesome movie...
I'm always here for you guys.
Now, a quality review:
awesome graphics
awesome style
awesome sound
awesome violence
awesome interactivity
awesome humor
awesome overall
Really awesome movie...
I'm always here for you guys.
Now, a quality review:
awesome graphics
awesome style
awesome sound
awesome violence
awesome interactivity
awesome humor
awesome overall
Awesome & Brilliant - as always
I must admit I am extremely pleased with this episode!
Other are good too, no doubts, but this one is the best. It is not boring at any part !!
I also must admit that I'm not a big fan of On The Moon series, I'm more addicted at theWeeble.
But you definitely deserve a frontpage. I voted five.
AWESOME !
It is the best Clock Crew day 2006 submission up to now!
It is good that you waited a day to finish (that is obvious).
Graphics is just awesome, complex.
Animation too.
The "story" too, original!
It wasn't boring at all, really good job at that too.
It would be good that it is a bit longer, but heh...
And nice syncing on the intro, too.
Nino
Quite Well, The History, Huh
It's a good start. I liked the scene you set up, and was interested to see what happened when the character got to the paintbrush. Sadly, he never made it.
Suggestions follow:
Consider taking some tutorials on Flash. Below that same link you clicked to submit your flash is a little link that says, "LEARN FLASH." Follow that link and you'll find a bunch of tutorials on how to make your animations look and sound good. Do some of those tutorials and your next effort should be a lot better.
Your flash needs a preloader with a start button. On the Newgrounds Flash Portal page, there's a link right below the "Submit" button that says, "GET NG LOADERS N' STUFF!" Click that link to download a .FLA with a preloader in it. Copy and paste the first frame of that into your animation, and you'll have a preloader, complete with a start button.
Your character moved along really slowly. Think about speeding him up a bit.
Your flash didn't really tell a story or demonstrate any kind of meaning or purpose. While "random" can be good if done well, you might consider adding some kind of a plot or story line to your next flash.
Newgrounds isn't the place to upload your tests. In Flash, you can push CTRL-ENTER to test your flash and see if it works. You can also export your flash to a .SWF file and see if it runs on your computer. If it does, your movie worked, and there's no need to test it on Newgrounds.
Your flash loops endlessly. You can add an actionscript stop(); code to the final frame of your flash to stop it from going on forever, or, better yet, add a replay button at the end. If you're unsure of how to do this, check the Newgrounds flash tutorials for help.
That's it!
:)
Would be a great one..
Nice idea - editting (very badly though) the Ultimate Showdown song and put it in the Clock movie.
Well - nice animation, graphics; but - LAGS.
This was indeed one of the best CC movies yet, but it lags too fucking much.
I put the quality to low but it still lagged.
I voted Five though!
Happy CC Day!
Nino
that's because it's on 12 frames per second, dolt.
Excellent!
Awesome work!
I was kind of shocked when I saw the intro. I thought the Clock is listening to that Pop.
I was wrong (thankfully).
The graphics was decent, animation too, and it's Clock Day huh?!
Fivened.
HAPPY CLOCK DAY
Thanks...i'm glad you enjoyed it! Happy Clock Day!!!
Not Bad
When I saw the title I thought it's another fan Clock movie, but I guess it's the opposite thing.
Well - I like how you drew the desert. Really nice especially how it's blended with the (very strong) sun.
Nice Clocks layout, too.
Nice movie, but it needs a kind of better story and it definitly needs to be longer.
HAhaha! | OWNAGE= 95%
LOL!
This was done alot time ago, and it is "normal" to have a bad graphics. Even though it has an great animating!!
You could add an small looping fx for the ambient, it wold be "much appreacitatet".
It was funny, and had an great message, I like that. That's an great story.
You don't beleive me?
Thanks for voting, Nino_JoJ!
Your experience points gave you a voting power of 5.11 votes. Your blam and protection points gave you an additional 10% of your experience power, meaning that your total vote power was worth 5.62 votes!
The more experience points you have combined with BLAM and PROTECTION points, the more your vote is worth!
You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 3.7975 to 3.8002!
Swan Tunner, you are a STAR. An NG star.
~Nino
Great, great, but cannot play | OWNAGE=98%
What should I say now?
That this is an ultimately superb Flash movie or not?
Should I say that better graphics than this has only the Bracknwood series from Adam Phillips ?
Hear me up, and you'll discover why is my message now like "Oh, oh, AWESOME, AWESOME. ahhh..".
It is because of the intesitiy.
Some scenes (mostly all) are SO laggy. Unbolievable, but truefull.
But apart from that, no other errors. And the style too...the animation is superb.
10 / 10 on that [ on generaly on this movie ]
Ten from ten now, and I voted Five. But, if that wasn't so chopy, that you made some "trick" to have good (meant awesome) graphics and to not lag as it lags, then it would be expressed thus:
100 / 10
Stay cool!
~Nino