Booooring....
First thing that caught my eye was that you say it's very violenci.
It is.
. It was impossible for me to tell if this is just a flash representation of a movie you saw, since old war movies aren't usually very breathtaking (modern war much less). The downfall is you tried to keep it traditional, but added fire instead of explosions. Which means you probably decided the bombs would be filled with napalm, something I'm pretty sure doesn't pack much of a punch but does a good job at destroying land value.
The attention to detail when displaying planes from the side shows you have some talent designing graphics, as long as you actually drew it yourself with many lines and circles before duplicating them from your original. The planes were the only thing that I found appealing, only having a vague recognition of what era they came from maybe. This is where >year< and location displayed every scene in documentaries becomes important so you learn something.
Using documentary paced material (slow pace) is only worth watching with narritive present. There were a few location names and the first strike rebut. So it was expected that it would move slow. If perhaps you focused less on the planes at the beginning it wouldn't be such a let down when nobody has anything to say about being attacked or why they're attacking. No screams, just those guys who... should have been pushing around circles on a big map.
There were a lot of pauses in between scenes where no music or sound was present. But there was sound somewhere so you get a point
Dropping bombs is bad, something you couldn't avoid while using planes. However, if you actually used less burning and more chunks of house and person. :). Attention to houses not bursting into flames because of high yeild explosives traveling at great velocity but people getting crushed by falling rocks? That's pure violence. You're not going to see that in the movies. Wouldn't mind seeing that here.
Not really something you can do besides watch. Nothing funny unless you get a chuckle out of seeing sombody's house on fire.
1/5 since you actually tried, but wouldn't want to see this again unless the pace speeds up or you throw in more violence.